ASSIGNMENT 3 "MY IDEAL PARTNER"
MY IDEAL PARTNER
What kind of
partner do I want? First of all, as a common woman I usually imagine that
someday, a self-confident man approaching me and say “I like someting natural”
, “that’s why I love you”. I really need someone who can released my nightmare
and lead me facing our future together. Besides of that, he will spend a time
to hear some words from my mouth that would be such an annoying part, but he still at his position to come over me.
Actually, I no
need a man who have a romantic words to flirt me even trying to spread his
pride excessively. I just need someone who understand what would I like to do, loving
me from my lacks until my enchantment, and always tell the truth about
everything. I also appreciated someone
from how he faces his obstacles, and how he fixed it. I admiring someone who
has a potential to keep smile and calm whereas he was down and tried to solve
his problems passionately.
I would like
to have a partner that likes travelling like me. So, we can explore entire
places of this world. And most important criteria for my future husband is must have an awareness about his family. He loves his family so much. Because,
in my mind if he attached his family tactfully so he will do the same deed for
my family. Hmmm, I realised to seek a
compatible partner for us need a time. We can said it like we must have a
consideration ripely to choose the best one.
Thank’s for reading my blog, I’ll keep waiting for
your arguments or advices for this blog about my grammar maybe about my
vocabulary too.
LOVELY PEOPLE :))
Uwwuu sweettt :3 but in the last paragraph the 'i'll' must be written in 'I'll' raa... good job and always getting better babyyy🌈
ReplyDeletethank you Annisa, I will revise it. Keep up for your works too!!!
DeleteNiceee Auraaa😄
DeleteHi Aura I really like your article here, you described your future husband very well. That must be a lovely man who will confessed his feeling for you someday :)
ReplyDeleteAnyway I found less suitable word like "released my nightmare". I've tried to find the proper one but I got nothing. Maybe you can try to find another one to make your article more stunning. You've done a great job, ra!
Thank's Lulaaa for your advice :))
DeleteYuhhuii your criteria is really good aura, hopefully you can meet someone based on your criteria and both of you love each other :)
ReplyDeleteAamiin Pitaa. Thank's!!
DeleteNice reason ra..you've done a great jon..I enjoy reading your article,hope you found that guy sometime...
ReplyDeleteWuaaa, thank's sistaaaah. it's my pleasure for having you enjoyed my blog hehe..
DeleteNyaw nyaw nyaw... You have a high standard yes... IIn the second paragraph, "Actually, I no need..." i think it's better if it's "Actually, I don't need"? Anyway, hope you can find someone just like what you want yaaa
ReplyDeleteit's an honour for me to get an advice from you hehe.. Thank you Amandaaa
DeleteNice aura
ReplyDeleteI do agree with amanda maybe it will be better if you write “ i don’t need”
you have same idea with Gracia, Thank you Steve!!!
DeleteWaww that greatt criteria, i hope you can found your partner like your want. Btw good work auraa👌👍
ReplyDeleteThank you Fauzaaaan!!!
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